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Let's up-level!


When we up-level, it means we read what we have written and we think of ways to add more detail to make it more interesting for the reader. 


For example:


The dog sat on the mat.


Let's add more detail to made this more interesting for the reader. 


The friendly dog called Wilson sat in the middle of the soft, round and blue mat. 


This gives the reader a much better idea of what is happening in the story. 




Read the pages below. Re-write the sentences in your books and up-level them to make them more interesting.

Remember to use the pictures to help you add detail.