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Finishing off 

Yesterday we asked you to re-write your own version of Percy the Park Keeper - After the Storm. Today we would like you to finish your stories. Please send us a copy of your story once you have finished we cant wait to read them! 

 

Challenge 

Editing and improving

Can you read through your story carefully. We would like you to check that it all makes sense. If not ask your adult help you to do this. You could then have a go at up-leveling the vocabulary and spellings. 

 

Example:

Add an adjective

There was a storm. 

There was a noisy storm raging and howling outside.

 

Add a conjunction

There was a storm. Percy was scared. 

There was a storm and Percy was scared. 

 

Check for capital letters and full stops

there was a storm and percy was scared

There was a storm and Percy was scared.

 

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